Kat Jackson

Thank you for the feedback! Honestly, I was a little unsure about a couple parts but thanks for making pointing out it would've been better off the other way. Lol, ...

Thank you for the reviews. My point on this way to make the reader think about whats happened instead of it being right there in front of them. Though, I ...

Thank you all for the reviews ^-^ I appreciated it

Well, it was in stanzas when it was being typed, then when I submitted, it was all separate. Sorry guys. Also, yes, on the chorus, it just goes straight through.

Well, mascara could also be used on the bottom lashes. When it gets wet, it drips down your face.

This is really cute. I love it. I like the feeling it gives when reading it. Keep writing. (: ~ Kat.

The rhyming really caught my attention. Just reading it, i could feel the vibe of it. I really like the ending also. I love the potential. :smt002

Wow, this is amazing. I wear no mascara So I cannot bleed is my favorite line. Artistic to compare mascara to bleeding. But, what if mascara was, and no rain. ...