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Re: Love
Thank you for the feedback! Honestly, I was a little unsure about a couple parts but thanks for making pointing out it would've been better off the other way. Lol, ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Alone
Thank you for the reviews. My point on this way to make the reader think about whats happened instead of it being right there in front of them. Though, I ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Whispers (Prologue)
Thank you all for the reviews ^-^ I appreciated it
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: You Were Never There
Well, it was in stanzas when it was being typed, then when I submitted, it was all separate. Sorry guys. Also, yes, on the chorus, it just goes straight through.
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Burning.
Well, mascara could also be used on the bottom lashes. When it gets wet, it drips down your face.
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: The Love of Him
This is really cute. I love it. I like the feeling it gives when reading it. Keep writing. (: ~ Kat.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Drowning
The rhyming really caught my attention. Just reading it, i could feel the vibe of it. I really like the ending also. I love the potential. :smt002
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Alone
Wow, this is amazing. I wear no mascara So I cannot bleed is my favorite line. Artistic to compare mascara to bleeding. But, what if mascara was, and no rain. ...
Nov 26, 2009